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All the girls want.. by Annyaonweb All the girls want.. by Annyaonweb
All the girls want a peaceful afternoon from time to time.. :) :heart:

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Tried something different.. hope you like. Would appreciate your opinions to help me improve further on.
(Since this work, i've learned how to handle perspective so hopefully will do it better next time!) :heart:

Edit: I SO appreciate all the feedback you all have given me, thank you so very much!!

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This piece caught my attention straight away from the thumbnail version. The color and simple lines were immediately eye-catching and the initial impact is obviously one that's very cute and adorable. Upon further inspection I like alll the details that you've put into this. Personally I'm a sucker for details, and in particular when you flesh out the details in a very genuine and familiar moment I find it really appealing. The title is very fitting for this piece because I think the 'girl' as the main subject is immediately endearing appealing. She has a very slight tinge of sexuality and a lot of playfulness, you can see so much about her and about the little cares of her world. She likes her pizza and her coke, her games, and of course all her cute kitties running around bringing the cuteness in her story over the top. Technically I think there's a lot of room for you to grow, but I think you have a sensibility that does a lot in making up for it. I think courageously presenting a story and pleasant details that people want to see goes a very long way in capturing peoples attentions and impressions in spite of the minute shortcomings. Seeing the hidden kitty toy under the couch will make up for the less than geometrically correct angles in most peoples mind.

Overall so very cute, and I appreciate the story you have to tell. Keep up the great work. :)
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The concept is definitely cute and interesting enough. The interior environment and the objects scattered around the room really give the viewer a sense of the personality of the main character.

The shading is minimal, which I suppose works decently for the somewhat cartoonish style. However, most of the objects are shaded completely in monochrome. When objects have shadows and light on them, they're usually of different, even complementary colours, not just a darkened version of the same hue. The image also doesn't have any discernible light source save for a select few shadows.

The biggest problem with the picture is the distorted perspective. Often when starting perspective, it helps to draw out a grid to organize your lines and make sure objects are sitting properly on the plane. There are so problems in terms of where the objects are sitting in relation to each other as well. The girl's foot is going behind the curtain, but the curtain is at least as far away as the width of the fishtank. This makes the picture confusing to look at.

The fishtank looks great, as do the kittens. They're definitely some of the best parts of the picture.
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askFP Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
(( or just pizza actually
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TheDuckster Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Love the detail in the background you did and her pose is fantastic. Upside-down poses are so hard to do, at least to me.
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013   Digital Artist
thank you, you're very kind. i'm glad you liked it :)
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crezpy123 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this very awesome
...keep it up...
:D
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Skadoske Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Simply love it! Kittens+pizza+a free weekend=awesomness. :)
I don't even see anything to improve :)
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Dragons-Garden Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
Kittend and pizza! Definatelly what I want. :D Great job love the style.
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Jetultra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
Very nice, love all those kittens!
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:iconlisacheesa:
LisaCheesa Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YUMMI!!!! I love pizza^^
the pic is cool;)
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XGoth-angelX Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow! Very nice drawn. I can see the amount of time put into this and it reflects in the drawing ^^
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Audeol Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the details ! Good work ! ^.^
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Writer
Awwwww look at all the cute kittens!
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U-R-IU Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
aweee i want some pizza tooooooo :((
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pegasister1 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
that's a really cool drawing! i very much like it and good job.
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techn0vert Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Artist
Nice coloring job you've done here :)
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Meektea Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha, that's me after graduating from college! Just me, the TV, and my animals. Great work, lots of awesome detail.
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:iconrbananas:
Rbananas Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Sweet. I can tell how much work you put into this.
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012   Digital Artist
thank you ^__^
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:iconanthum:
Anthum Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student General Artist
the girl is pretty much my life story while my parents yell at me to less lazy haha love it
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012   Digital Artist
^__^
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retaw1 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome drawing,I really like the colors :)
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
thank you ^__^
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TheAnimalsRight Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A modern CÚzanne? be careful the experts don't try to improve you right out of your originality
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
haha, that would be a problem if it were the case but i have to study a lot to get to a point where i can portray my ideas, definitely not there yet :) this was just for rapid, random fun at that time. the things lurking around in my mind are definitely more tense (and interesting i would hope) than this work :) i'm trying to improve to let the originality out :)
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DonJaun Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Nice work :)
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
thankies~
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Glooriah Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*.* It's very relaxing and i like your technique very much!^^
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
you're very kind <3 thank you~
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Glooriah Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^:aww:
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re11ding Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Look at all dem kitty cats. They're everywhere!
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
kittycalypse, beware of the invasion <3
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GiuliaCookie Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
I love it :3
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
thankies~
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Aphelps Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Fantastic amounts of detail! ^__^ I love the kittens especially.
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
awesome :D glad you like them <3 i don't have much practice with animals so i was really relieved when they came out so cute :D
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erethusianelf Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so detailed. It reminded me of my position whenever i'm reading o drawing.
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
that's a very comfy and slightly dizzy-ing pose, right?? i love it too, though :D
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Princess-CoCo-154 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg so much details, i really love it, also the pizza looks awesome, great job
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
thanks!
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Princess-CoCo-154 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem sweetie!^_^
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BelievetoMakeADream Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha reminds me of myself
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
same here <3 i made this with elements i enjoyed a lot, things i had and made, basicallyy elements that hinted to my bday (like the clock, the writing on the phone, etc) so i'm glad others can put themselves in the same role, there's so much in common with other people, it's just great to see that <3
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PaulCynic Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
lul, great scene :) Though the piece isn't finished from a technical stand point. Elements need to be further developed, and forms needs a truer shape :) Great job over all.
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
for sure, it wasn't supposed to be too detailed, it was supposed to be something fast and fun for my bday at the time, but i'm happy you like it!
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maxevry Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Nicely done! It's a great composition, and a pose that would not be out of place in a Norman Rockwell painting... if Rockwell were still alive, that is. ;) Great work, love it!
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
thank you so much <333
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katomanX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
awesome work :D
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Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
thanks!
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CobaltOfMarch Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
LOL Beautiful! You really did an awesome job with the details! I'm truly impressed!
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:iconannyaonweb:
Annyaonweb Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012   Digital Artist
thanks a lot!
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Linked-Memories Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012   Digital Artist
So true..Nom pizza. Lovely job
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