All the girls want a peaceful afternoon from time to time..
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Tried something different.. hope you like. Would appreciate your opinions to help me improve further on. (Since this work, i've learned how to handle perspective so hopefully will do it better next time!)
Edit: I SO appreciate all the feedback you all have given me, thank you so very much!!
A really good deviation that caught my eye as soon as I saw it. I like how it isn't too complicated and is easy to relate to as it shows a typical household featuring a teenage girl just enjoying herself. As I am teenage girl myself, I can confidently express that all of these things appeal to me such as pizza, drink, nice weather tv etc. It has a big impact on me. Also I like how you used quite bright colours. I think that loads of artists these days are too busy doing complicated patterns and abstract art but this is the kind of thing that I myself admires because I can associate myself with this scenario as I have probably done it before. It definitely has a big impact on me and the title is really eyecatching. For next time I recommend using more primary colours to enhance the mood of the scene (eg on the sofa and such.) I know that that would probably improve it for me. I think it is very original too because as noted before, I see so many complicated detailed deviations on da and I just think that there is little meaning to them and that they are hard to understand or relate to. This however, is original, quirky and I am really impressed.
Upon seeing this piece I immediately remembered college and began to grin. This was my best friend and appartment-crasher to a "T"! Every detail is in place: the inability of the girl to sit on the couch in a normal fashion, Cike & pizza (staple foods of a college student), games & electronics, and in our case various felines traipsing through our pad. Well, my pad, really - she just crashed there 5 out of 7 nights, sort of like the cats!
I like the use of color - basic and simple, uncluttered to ofset the clutter of the girl's life. Well done! It allows the eye to take in everything without getting "taken in by" everything. Even the slightly off center or out-of proportion sense works because face it - what average girl's life or perception is completely centered or in total proportion at that age?
All in all, a wonderful piece packed with fun! Great job!
I like the use of color - basic and simple, uncluttered to ofset the clutter of the girl's life. Well done! It allows the eye to take in everything without getting "taken in by" everything. Even the slightly off center or out-of proportion sense works because face it - what average girl's life or perception is completely centered or in total proportion at that age?
All in all, a wonderful piece packed with fun! Great job!
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